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Everything Will Turn Out Fine by ~AncientFlounder:iconAncientFlounder:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


This is your last chance to tango
With the likes of me
Take your chance, before it fades
And you are left dancing solo

Don’t weep now
I’ve cried enough for us both
A kiss and embrace will do
A good enough job before I go


Your decision and mine
May not coincide
But time is a crazy thing
Everything will turn out fine


Wipe those tears, girl
It was coming down to this
But, God, how it hurts to see
All our hopes unfurl

It’s time for me to leave
My ride won’t wait forever
I’ll call when time mends most
Don’t waste too much time to grieve


It may not seem fine
Pain wracking body, soul and mind
But, give it time, sweet girl
Everything will turn out fine
©2005-2009 ~AncientFlounder
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Author's Comments

Though the haze of little sleep comes this number. I haven't really tried writing song lyrics, so I took a crack at it. Turned out fairly well, but let me know what you think.

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~The-Administrator Mar 27, 2005, 1:25:41 PM
Well, the tough thing about lyrical poetry is that it usually doesn't sound so hot written down. Oddly, though, this still looks and sounds good.
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~AncientFlounder Mar 27, 2005, 2:39:33 PM
It really is. I kept wondering whether or not it was coming out right as I was getting it down, since it sounded great in my head. Glad it turned out okay. :thumbsup:

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"Do you know how many Asian people with glasses are here right now?"
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~FrostedWind Apr 11, 2005, 7:27:14 PM
Wow, I love it! :+fav: It's a very emotional piece, and it's an emotion that falls really close to the heart... Keep it up! :hug:

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When nothing else makes you feel right, write...
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~AncientFlounder Apr 12, 2005, 12:05:43 AM
Gracias. :hug: And also gracias for the fave, too. ^_^

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"Do you know how many Asian people with glasses are here right now?"
:iconfrostedwind:
~FrostedWind Apr 12, 2005, 9:47:17 AM
Hey, that's what I'm here for, isn't it? :hug: Keep it up!

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When nothing else makes you feel right, write...
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